Developing my Group's Idea...
As I joined with my group, we started to develop different ideas for our final film idea. From the very beginning all 3 of us came to the conclusion that we wanted to produce a film based on my idea. Our group liked the idea of following a troubled and lost protagonist, who we felt could create an emotional impact on our audience, which is a key ingredient to the Drama Genre. All 3 of us felt as though we enjoyed the drama genre the most and felt that we could produce an interesting and captivating narrative based on our love of this genre.
Our main problem with the 'OCD' idea was how we could make this story dynamic and different to what an audience has seen before as we felt as though the idea was more suited to a drama series rather than a film. With this in mind, we started thinking outside of the box and thinking of contrasting and new ideas we could pair with the original idea.
Due to one of our group members being very passionate about the thriller genre, we decided to try and mix the two genres together and this is where we came up with our final treatment...
Group Treatment...
The story starts by introducing a man who is in his early thirties. We are not given much information about him, but we see parts of his daily routine. Everything that he does is very carefully organized and he takes a lot of time over certain specific actions (locking and unlocking the door 6 times each night). We gradually work out that he has an obsessive compulsive disorder, although it is not told to us explicitly. We see more and more of his life in these opening few minutes and realize that he is entirely alone. This will be shown in a stylized montage rather than continuity editing. The montage is broken when he accidentally gets swept up by a crowd of drunk guys on the street and taken into a bar with them. He tries to protest but they’re having none of it. As he is trying to escape the bar (which is pushing his paranoia to the limit) he starts to really stress out as he can’t find a door to lock and unlock. Suddenly a woman about the same age as him comes up to him and asks him if he’s alright. Without pausing to introduce himself or anything he says he needs to find a door to unlock. Without questioning him she takes him round to the back of the bar where there is a door used by the staff to get in and out. She gives him the keys telling him she works at the bar a few nights each week. After being allowed to go through his ritual he calms down a lot and the woman starts to talk to him. She seems unusually friendly towards him, which takes him by surprise as people don’t usually show an interest in him for long. As a result he is initially defensive – every time she compliments him he tries to play down what she has said or comes up with something that is wrong with him, a reason she shouldn’t like him. These reasons mostly focus around his OCD. However she is persistent, assuring him that she genuinely likes him for who he is. We watch as their relationship progresses, he is the happiest he has ever been and this manifests itself in some of his symptoms lessening (realistic?). We skip ahead in time as the two of them are returning from their wedding reception. As he is locking and unlocking the door she comes up behind him, we think to hug him as we have seen her do this before, it has become a part of their daily ritual, but she instead presses a tazer into his back until he blacks out. When he wakes up he is in his car in his garage with the doors locked and the ignition started. Fumes have already flooded the vehicle and he cannot get out before he passes out again, this time for the last time.
Up until this point the film has been told from the point of view of the man telling his story from his perspective, however now the narrative switches over to the woman. This is signified by the addition of her voiceover. We rewind time slightly and see her as she is putting him into the car, writing out a suicide note, connecting pipes to the exhaust, putting the key in the ignition, turning it, locking the doors and leaving, as she leaves her voice over says ‘whoops’ very coldly.
The next few scenes show the police investigation in which she plays the part of the shocked and grieving newly wed perfectly. As these scenes progress, however, we hear her voiceover explaining to us how she set everything up to look like a suicide. At this point we don’t know why she killed him.
After the police leave, declaring the case a routine suicide with no suspicious circumstances, we see her walk upstairs to their bedroom and pick up a small china shepherd figurine. She looks at it for a while then wraps it up very carefully in bubble wrap and paper to protect it. We learn that this figurine was a treasured family heirloom hundreds of years ago and was buried with her one of her ancestors, but was then stolen from his tomb. After finding this out at the age of 17 she became obsessed with tracking it down and returning it to its rightful place in order to restore the honour of her family. After years she succeeded in tracking the figurine down to the man we meet at the start, who unwittingly inherited it, not attributing any real significance to it. Since the woman’s plan stems from the idealogical mission of returning honour to her family, she couldn’t simply take the ornament as it would still not rightfully be hers – she would be no better than the thief all those hundreds of years ago. Instead she needed to find a way to transfer the figurine into her family’s bloodline again. Buying it off the man would be the logical explanation, but the woman has such strict idealogical rules that she can’t let herself consider this as it would disrespect the memory of her ancestors, as a result she concocts the plan to work her way into his life, eventually marrying him. She can then doctor his will ever so slightly to include a clause which means the figurine will pass to her in the event of his death. As soon as they are married she drops the pretense, kills him and the figurine is officially and rightfully hers.
The film ends with her travelling to the tomb to replace the figurine. While she is on the plane she begins to remember the man, tries to push him out of her thoughts but cannot. Up until this point she has been entirely focused on her goal, emotion has never got in the way. Despite her guilt she carries on with her task and the film ends with her arriving at the tomb, placing the figurine in with all the others which are already there and then exhaling. This is intentionally anti-climactic.
The Script...
This is a PDF of our first draft of the script. The main issue with our first draft was that it was too short so it was hard to analyse the postives and negatives to the script as a whole. All of the group members contributed to the writing of this script.
Here is our second draft of our script - we added to our script with more detail and felt as though we were confident about this draft. The only issue we had with this script was some dialogue needed to be tweaked but we felt as though doing improvisation with our chosen actors would be a natural and more real way of coming up with dialogue that seemed to flow and did not feel like it was written.
FINAL DRAFT
Mooodboards and Character Profiles
This is a character profile I created, with additional help from my other group members. This is a character profile on the protagonist, James. This highlights his OCD illness and the personality traits that come with that and also how he looks and what he would wear.
This is a character profile, Josh created with the help from the group. This is a character profile on Helen. It highlights her as a mysterious character who appears to be very beautiful and caring but has secrets hidden within.
This is a mood board for the tone and style of what we are going for, for our film. This was created by Jenna, but had help and inspiration from the rest of the group. The tones are very dark creating a sinister and intesnse atmosphere and the mood board also shows the themes that our film involves.
Storyboard
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Here are some rough ideas of the type of shots we are going for and what those shots include. These storyboards were made by the group to give us a visual idea of what our film is going to look like.
Name for our Film
This is a document that I created, exploring different film titles. The ones that I have annotated are the ones I think fit best. As a group we decided we loved the name 'COMPULSION' as it explains what are film is based on, which is centered around a man that has a compulsive behavior due to his illness.
LOCATIONS
1. A bathroom that included a sink and a mirror that is attached.
(This bathroom is in Wimbledon in one of our group members'
house) I chose this location as its a simple bathroom that doesnt
show much personality, which is what we want from the start of
the film as we want the audience to have a pretty blank canvas
as to what our protagonist is like.
2. The house scene on page 1 (hallway)
(A friends house in London)
I chose this hallway as it is long, which is what we want for our scene -
it also does not have any weird angles, which is needed as we want the
film to be quite symmetical.
3. Park scene
(Wimbledon park)
I chose this park as it is a
nice area, without it being
overtly posh.
4. A large corner shop (Bucks) - I chose this corner shop as it is larger
than most normal corner shops, which I think will be helpful when
coming to film as we will have space. It is also a very ordinary shop
that I would think James would visit on a daily basis. It is also in a
quiet area, which I think is important as James does not like to be in
big crowds.
5. A village street
(Buckinghamshire)
I chose this area to film
because it is quiet (fitting
to James' character) and
it is also very pretty, creating
a romantic feel when
James meets Helen.
6. A pub (Buckinghamshire)
I chose this pub because
it is in the street as above.
It is small, which I would
consider James would
visit on a night out.
It also has a back secti
which we could use for the
dialogue scenes.






Survey (market-research for the film)
Jenna created the survey, with the help of myself and Josh, in coming up with questions to ask. The feedback was helpful as it gave an indication of what was expected for our film and ideas that were liked by an audience.



It was interesting to see that the majority of people who felt interested to answer our survey was of the age range 15-20. This gave us an insight to our possible demographic of our film and how we can produce our film to target our audience. This could possibly be achieved by using many effective visuals that might intrigue a young audience. I was glad that both female and male completed our survey, showing interest from both genders. We thought this was due to having two main characters being different genders and both of them having complex characters, which an audience would find captivating.



For the name of the film I found it interesting that most people chose the name 'IMPULSE' due to it not being the groups first choice. Our first choice was 'COMPULSION' due to the compulsive mind set that James has throughout the film and we also felt it explained Helen's compulsive atttitude towards getting to know James and becoming a part of his life. We also like the name 'IMPULSE' so we will futhur discuss the name and see whether the survey would change our mind about the name.
We were pleased about most people liking 'BLUE MOON PRODUCTIONS' as this was the groups first choice. The description of how we would design the 'BLUE MOON PRODUCTIONS' was also greatly received. This gave the group the confidence to go ahead with our company name choice of 'BLUE MOON PRODUCTIONS'. We felt as though this name fitted well with the drama genre as the moon is a dramatic symbol of light vs dark, which is one of the main theme we will be exploring in our film.
(JOSH ANALYSIS' THE NEXT 4 QUESTIONS ASKED FROM THE SURVEY)
Shotlist and Sceduele for Filming
This is our shotlist for our 3 filming days that we had. We stuck to the list throughout the days although we added some extra shots for more richness and detail for the final cut.
This is the film shooting timetable. We stuck to this to give us the best use our of time possible. It was a simple timetable that was easy to follow for our filming days.